| This was a challenge poem, proposed by one of my high school teachers. His feedback meant/means a lot to me, and both he and I adore this poem. It tells a story using seemingly vastly different subjects. Enjoy! |
~amandamadhat
We're all mad here...Mister Perfection
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Weathering"It's one too many rainclouds." he said, as he glanced out the window. "tell me stories of sunshine." he'd laugh as his eyes sweetly poured into mine. I took to them like bees to honey. my heart began to bruise. as I whispered, "we've got nothing to lose." yes, I nodded. there's far too many rainclouds, I have yet to see the sun. You fought the war-yet to be won. The war of unacceptance. Dear child, must you torture your mother with dying? of time going too swiftly as time often does? Red wagons. Ice cream smiles. Gone now, even with your joy.Weathering
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The Forlorn FiveOnce.The Forlorn Five
There was a space.
An endless, boundless white space.
In it, a fawn. A tortoise, a snake, a fox and a hare.
Slowly, slowly.
Things came and went.
New life birthed.
The old had faded.
And yet, the five remained.
The fawn comfortable in the familiar, the tortoise soaking up all time
the snake invincible, the fox cunning and the hare-quick to act not to think.
The hare tried to hop as high as one's elongated legs could take him, and yet he remained.
The fawn grew all too comfortable, all too comfortable to fall for fox's trickery.
the tortoise took t
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Ayu's b-day passed. So....
I bought her a Membership for three months,
Now a surprise journal isn't ntohing without comments so please comment on Here i would appriciate it.
- Sora Sohmi
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I went through my comments in my gallery, and I saw this comment from you:
"Would you be interested in an art trade?
I can do a poetry/prose piece on a topic of your choice.
I have a character based off of Sarabi that's just begging to be drawn, and you capture the texture and style so well.
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Unfortunately I do not accept trades... but I do accept commissions, if you are interested. For more information:
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"Nothing encourages creativity like the chance to fall flat on one's face."
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I can sleep now, and slowly but surely I'm becoming more and more able to do things independently again.
Hope you're doing well as well love.
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"Nothing encourages creativity like the chance to fall flat on one's face."
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